Friday, August 26, 2016

My First persuasive Writing


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  1. Hi Yvette, I am enjoying seeing you post more work onto your blog. Keep up the good work. This persuasive writing however is too small to read. You should ask one of your classmates to show you how to edit a post so that it is larger.

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  2. Hi Yvette, I am enjoying seeing you post more work onto your blog. Keep up the good work. This persuasive writing however is too small to read. You should ask one of your classmates to show you how to edit a post so that it is larger.

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  3. Hi Yvette Im Hana from Kawakawa Primary School. I really like the way u write about that lollies should not come to school because it told me about why we should not take them to school .


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