Auckland trip…
Going to auckland “i said to mum i can’t
Wait to see grandad when. Me and mum got there he was already outside on the doorstep. When me and mum got there i gave him a big hug mum too. Then we all went inside grandad showed us our room’s. We all sat down and had a kai “i was so happy too see my grandad again”.
My next learning steps are
To add more detail to my story (adjectives, interesting words)
Know how to use speech marks correctly
Use different timewords.
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