HELP!

 WALT use a variety of precise words and phrases to add interest or information    

 To be successful we will:

• Include interesting words for said
• Use interesting adjectives (describing words) verbs (doing words) and phrases 

                                                                  Oh no help

On one lovely Friday afternoon just as I woke up from a nana nap there was something very odd by me. “Ahhh help some one want’s to eat me!” I gulped. But when I got up it was just a kitten a harmless one too. Dad dashed into the room as fast as he could. “ Are you okay?” he quavered. Just by looking into his face you could see that he was very worried. “I’m just fine dad are you okay?”   I said with a smile on my face. “ of course I am“ he said. His face lit up with joy.  

                                                              Look at this!

After that I went outside with with my most beloved sister Shonagh. “What is this?” I boasted. “you found my gem! Where was it.” She said happily. Then joy left Shonagh face alone and I can say that twice. A while later, dad came into the room. “What’s going on in here” he bragged. “Nothing much” Edward said like he didn’t care. That’s true he never cares about anyone but the truth is the truth I mean right?.          

                                                                         Why?    

“Give it back to me!” she nagged maybe 1,000 times. “Fine” I replied with a groan but that’s only because she was chasing me around. At night I thought to myself why did i find it and how did I find it and why did I give it to her? That will alway remain in my head. Also the way Shonagh was crying she could flood the whole house soon!.     

                                                   

                                                      My Reflection              

I will never forget the part when I saw my mum filled with joy and my feeling’s that day was pretty funny feeling.