Huge Waves!!

I have tried to proof read my own writing

Trip To The Wave Pools  

On the 4th 2017. me and my whole family went to the wave pools.          

   “it was so much fun until the waves had STOPPED” was it the people thinking i was having too much fun. Or were they trying to be mean to us. But i found out it was normal they needed to

stop the waves., so the other  people can go in the slide and the slide was. scary at first because  there was a black side but it was fun.in the end it was awesome so that's it i hope you had an awesome holiday as good as mine.